A new page is up:
Page 15
It may feel counter intuitive to go back to the middle of the story, but the reworkings will link it more solidly and help improve the characters appeal.
What’s really fun to see is the overall improvements to my art over the years. I don’t plan at this moment to redo the pages after these, as I’ve mentioned I’m going to rework text and maybe do some minor tweaks to link it. A few of the old ones had to be removed because it did change that much.
Here’s a comparison page. Roughly 4 yrs apart.
Thanks again for all of you following along on this adventure!